Checklist for essay writing

Not Achieved	Achieved	Merit	Excellence
The explanation is short (6 words!) and not informative/ detailed	·       Explanation is better – more detailed and informative. ·       Has a message from the text ·       Uses PEEL ·       Mentions the audience	·       More linking – link to themselves, they relate to the character, the audience. ·       More details about the example – what happens after ·       More details about the character ·       Has a message from the text ·       Uses PEEL	·       More linking – link to themselves, they relate to the character, the audience. ·       Also links world wide – beyond the text ·       Gets to Excellence through the Explanation ·       More details about the character ·       Has a message from the text ·       Uses PEEL